Finaly Free

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  • Happiness

    Finaly Free

    The sun on my face
    A fresh summer breeze
    A slpash in the pool
    Leaves in the trees
    Ducks in the pond
    Icecream and tea
    Walk in the park
    Summer come to me
    Birds in the fountain
    A cry of glee
    I'm smiling ear to ear
    School's out, YIPPY!!
    We get to do whatever
    Finaly free
    Run through the sprinklers
    Night in a tree
    Summer means camping
    And being happy as can be
    It's summer time
    Finaly free

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    Artie commented on Finaly Free

    06-28-2012

    This brings back some memories! Summer vacation rocks!! 10 from me

    Mr1hunnit commented on Finaly Free

    01-21-2011

    I like this poem a lot and feel like that may damn self

    NitaBoo commented on Finaly Free

    01-19-2011

    Pretty cool...it reminded me of relaxation and fun during the summer time...

    scrye commented on Finaly Free

    07-27-2009

    oh my how you remind me of myself when i was young and writing. excellent work i really loved it. Another 10.

    jj1562

    07/27/2009

    thank you 4 all 10s

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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