FIRST FLIGHT

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    Ripped from the pages of my journal

    FIRST FLIGHT

     

    I took flight beyond the clouds

    I had no fear of height and I was somewhat proud

    It was my first plane ride into the blue

    So I dared not to look down or I was through

    I felt the plane leave the ground as it slowly rise

    I then tightly closed my eyes

    My heart start’d racin’

    My nerves start’d pacin'

    Before I knew it; fear I was facin’

    I gripped the plane’s seat with a frantic hold

    The nerve of me to have a window seat; now that was bold

    The plane shook as it taxied down the runway

    I sunk into my seat and began to pray

    We were airborne and peacefulness surround

    Then a voice from the cockpit made a sound

    The pilot announced we’re five-thousands feet off the ground

    A passenger next to me commented, first flight?

    I asked, was it obvious? As I gripped the seat with fright

    I finally opened my eyes--the nerve of me

    I peered out the window to witness not a sight of trees

    Lord I was in the mist of your heavenly clouds

    The noise of my beatin' heart was somewhat loud

    Then I saw my life flash before me

    I yawned; it was over on the count of three

    Well If this plane crash at least I seen how my life been

    Now I had another reason to pray again

    Before I knew it we were about to land

    Lord when we touched ground I got down and kissed the sand

    My first flight was over and I was glad

    To see it end I was almost sad---Not

    Will I fly again? only God can tell

    Maybe when frosty the snowman make it through hell

    Don’t call me a chicken because I don’t wanna fly around

    That’s not what I fear, it’s the crashin' on the way down

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    WordManipulator commented on FIRST FLIGHT

    08-26-2010

    Aw man I know how you felt, I had that same feeling when I first flew. I'll never forget it. I damn near threw up. or maybe because altitude and alcohol dont mix.....hehe....

    SEVEN

    10/25/2010

    Word'''....U dip.....hehe.......thanx

    shywoodrose commented on FIRST FLIGHT

    08-17-2010

    interesting! I love experience.............................

    SEVEN

    08/18/2010

    Thanx

    Lillixfan14 commented on FIRST FLIGHT

    08-17-2010

    amazing seven! you did absolutly wonderful! i rate a 10 on this

    SEVEN

    10/25/2010

    Thanx....Lill

    Teardrops commented on FIRST FLIGHT

    08-16-2010

    i love this and used to say the right bothers were flying some of the planes i was on . Great write and stay on the ground if you can Marie

    SEVEN

    10/25/2010

    Thanx .... Teardrops

    Artie commented on FIRST FLIGHT

    08-16-2010

    I love the humor in this. I've been on quite a few flights, and it seems like everytime there's someone like this nearby. Great write - 10 from me

    SEVEN

    08/16/2010

    Thanx Artie......I think i got the fear of flyin' bug outta me......we will see if'n I take another flight...

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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