First Love

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  • Confusion
    • Cakeboy9
    • "Fear Less, hope more; eat less chew more; whine less, breathe more; talk less, say more; hate less, love more; and all good things are yours."

    First Love

     THE DAYS WERE BAD
    THE GOING WAS TOUGH
        NO LOVE IN MY LIFE
        NO ONE I COULD TRUST
    NO FRIEND TO HEAR MY SORROWS
    NO ONE COULD GIVE ME THAT TOUCH
        THEN YOU ENTERED MY LIFE
        & I COULD SEE YOU IN MY EYES
    ALL THIS HAPPENED WAS MY LUCK
    OR I WUD HAVE BEEN OUT FOR A DUCK
        YOU WERE SOO COOL
        AND WE TOOK OUR TIME
    THE NIGHT HAD GONE
    AND THE DAY HAD COME
            I HAD A FRIEND THAT WAS ALL IN ONE.

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    Karma885 commented on First Love

    10-01-2009

    AWWWW SO CUTE... I LOVED THIS POEM AWWW. SOO GETS A 10
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    chucky1982 commented on First Love

    10-01-2009

    wow cake this is great a good read. im glad u came to this site we always love good poetry. bravo
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    Cakeboy9

    10/02/2009

    Thank u dear!

    chubbc commented on First Love

    10-01-2009

    good poem but if i might add you might want to put more emotion into a poem of this nature let it come from the heart just a thought but i liked it
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    poetsara113 commented on First Love

    10-01-2009

    very nice i liked it alot so nice when you have a true friend
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    Cakeboy9

    10/01/2009

    Thank u Dear.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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