First Part of Melody "Unseen"

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    First Part of Melody "Unseen"

     Theres many
    just like me
    but just like me
    you dont see

    their empty little faces
    to the left and right
    their like this songs spaces
    unseen at first sight

    when they laugh
    you may blink
    when they pass
    you may think

    'Oh what a shame'
    but you'll soon forget...

    When they hear your words
    They never forget...

    Do you know what a world is without sun?
    It's the life we live amid everyone
    Sometimes we're not really sure that we're there
    But surely death dosent bring this kind of despair.

    By: Liz Prosser



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    jj1562 commented on First Part of Melody "Unseen"

    12-29-2011

    depression hurts cymbaltas no help what we need is not medication but someone to dig us out of the hole rescue use from the colapsed mines and colapsed minds.
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    Lizziewriter27

    09/16/2012

    I couldn't agree more. Sometimes that person has to be ourself--we just have to find something to inspire us.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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