First Pleasures

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First Pleasures


 

 

 Her feelings take flight

like a butterfly

discovering its wings

a soul soaring free

in her garden

of earthly delights.

Her joy

radiates first light

as it kisses

the morning dew

while revealing

its alluring blanket of color.

Following her heart

she decends the wind

lighting softly

upon a petal

her first taste

of the rose.

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slohan4u commented on First Pleasures

09-16-2009

great poem!! read my poem "butterfly of love". wow!! we had some of the same thoughts.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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