Five Haiku

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    Five Haiku

     I am so angry
    People say it is delicious
    What do people know?

                                                          My head rings loudly
                                                          Exploding within my mind
                                                          I can stand it no more  

    Can you not see it
    As plain as the morning sun
    I can see it clear.

                                                          The roses budding
                                                          Bees are sucking the nectar
                                                          Attar is tempting

    Shadows do run fast
    The murder is on the wire
    Once here then gone.  

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    Lolee commented on Five Haiku

    08-18-2009

    Okay, now this is nice...and so different. Check out my two Haiku...okay? One of them sounds like one of yours...see if you can tell which one.
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    Mangus commented on Five Haiku

    07-16-2009

    I have become quite fond of the poetry style of haiku. I think it is because the power it presents in such few words
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    Tempestlady commented on Five Haiku

    07-10-2009

    So succinct! What is Attar?. Very therapeutic. Write on...
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    Troubador

    07/11/2009

    Dearest tempestlady Attar is that substance that gives a rose its scent. I like writing haiku. Actually all poetry.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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