Flawless wings

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Flawless wings

Emptied out of self
he bore my pain,
took away the wrath
and drove out the shame.

Using tenderness mixed with
mystic powers,
healing sessions lasting
for hours.

Taking me places in a dream
like state,
he replaced with love
all the torment and hate.

Now he's gone but not
from my heart,
his words will live on
they'll never depart.

He gave me a set of
flawless wings,
and told me to fly as high
as my soul sings.

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AmadeusEx commented on Flawless wings

06-29-2009

sounds like you fell in love with the naked dream indian who visited wayne in WW2....all joking aside, i enjoyed this poem, the last four lines were the best , ended it well

randomthoughts commented on Flawless wings

06-23-2009

so much to say......................................................................................

jademelissa74 commented on Flawless wings

06-23-2009

A passionately written poem! I love the imagery that you have portrayed through the entire poem. I appreciate the level of interest that follows each and every line! Thank you for sharing!

FLAWLES commented on Flawless wings

06-23-2009

How are you pg? This one kinda got to me. It has that "up-lifting" feeling. I hope you don't mind; but I have something to go along with this.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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