Fled to Death

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Fled to Death

bitter nothings passed these lips as words poured towards you in silent riffs
a melody of sour times, the money is good and so the smell of muscidimes
serene breezes flow through us,patches of blue and pain in the brush
mountains agape and my heart does dispair ,that in this cold world i'd follow you anywhere
it's more than love which gases emotions,sweet nothings carried me across this dark ocean
these chimes of the souless few ,do sway a heartful song for you
all yours and mine we may feel sorrow ,yet all is well in the hope of
lands unhollowed.....

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pinkbutterfly commented on Fled to Death

08-13-2009

very good use of vocab...some words i never heard of. i like to get into the minds of other poets and you have definitely put me there.

DARKPOET113 commented on Fled to Death

04-28-2009

we would all be so lucky to find that. great job

dangedmanjr commented on Fled to Death

03-24-2009

great flow and visuals....very nice

BrielleC commented on Fled to Death

02-27-2009

Nice picture you've painted. great use of vocabulary.

bforibus commented on Fled to Death

01-25-2009

awesome write. i loved the mixture of colors just playing and battling for attention in this poem. very gud write

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

jadienblu’s Poems (16)

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exit 5
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Fled to Death 13
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