Flipping Magnets

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Flipping Magnets

Get a load of me, get a load of you
I’m conservative and your external.
It's just like we were opposites forced to attract
like magnets pushing and pulling
just needing to be flipped over.
What if this is just the beginning,
precocious thoughts of life
circumstance waiting to
hold hands with you when we're out at night.
Walking side by side
high enough for you to make me wonder;
where it’s going
high enough for you to pull me under.
Here we go, we're at the beginning
but my heads spinning;
thinking thought of
an itch we know we are gonna scratch,
in our life journey together
are we there yet?
Wouldn't it be beautiful
if opposites could attract?
It would be inevitable,
to not breathe or speak
clearly when I think of you.

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jtlove commented on Flipping Magnets

07-09-2010

What feels better than scratching an itch? Then scatching the itch of one you love? You scratch my back and I'll scratch yours. Scratchin' itches and feelin' alright:)

Hiporlacking commented on Flipping Magnets

07-09-2010

I'm not so much a fan of the flow of this piece as I am the content. I can see a strong bond between two people. They've reached a point where their current relationship could manfiest into something more. You've captured these fleeting thoughts quite well.

pdxgrrll

07/09/2010

I agree about the flow. I was trying to find a good format, but the words just didn't fit right, so I went with free form. Thanks for the comment. I like to get feedback.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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