flirting
The dollhouse falls
Losing itself-
The violins
Also listen
The dollhouse, false
Lost itself-
The violence
Still listens
The dollhouse lost itself
in false violins,
listening to violence
flirting
4 Comments
Tags: Frustrations Of Life
- catarino
- Cultures come to conquer and their gods applaud.
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12-26-2009
- Agreed...this is a fantastic play on words...quick witted and sharp...thank you for sharing it!
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11-10-2009
- Yes, you have a repertoire of words that is second to none. And, those violins played a la pizzacato (going faster and faster) and then crashing........Caterino indeed these few words gave forth a melancholy song, or should I say lament......
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06-27-2009
- Wow. Best play on words I think I've ever read! To read it out loud is fun,
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06-06-2009
- Wonderful wordplay! You achieve a "meaning" beyond what the individual words convey--which is, of course, one of the purposes of poetry.
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