Flowers

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The poem talks about the tree in the cruel winter bereft of the warmth, Rest is for the readers to locate and enjoy.

Flowers

           Flowers

Humming birds   hone   a sweet rhythm,

 serenade:   twittering  sparrows

hang   around  in the Hope  emanating Dawn,

but  no  blooming  flowers in my  garden,

but   only sinking   buds   in the  mud ,

bitten   by the cruel  frosty hands  of 

shrivelling   Winter,

the   half   lived   stems

crave  for  the  warmth,

looking  upwards, what else

they   could do? Where  else

they expect ? could it be from

mostly self centred  humanity?

Trees  know  better.

 

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Doshima’s Poems (14)

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Flowers 0
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