Fly With Me

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    Fly With Me

    Spread your wings and fly
    With me
    Over fields and meadows
    Sway
    We fly so high we fly
    Just fly with me my love
    So sweet
    Touching the fields of four
    Leaf clovers
    Just fly into the heaven’s
    Way above clouds so
    Thick
    Into the abyss of heaven’s
    Bliss
    With hands held tight and
    Flies so free
    Above the moon and the
    Sun
    Without a care to follow
    Me
    Just flying into the planets
    Stars
    We circle the planets around
    And about
    As we taken flight so high and
    Over above
    Nothing but white thick fluffy
    Clouds beneath our feet

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    BDIsernhagen commented on Fly With Me

    06-01-2009

    I feel light, like I,too, have just flown. I really enjoyed your imagry here, and the way you structured the poem first kinda sturck me, but now I like it ( the structure, I always liked the poem)
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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