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  • Sea

    fog

    fog
      
    lone
    bay-man
    cut 
    deeper
    into
    chilled
    cotton-fog
     
    arousing
    island's 
    wild-life
    laying-low
    under
    a-thick
    calm
    haze
    blanket
     
    deer
    bounded
    into
    tall
    marsh
    grasses
    to-hide
     
    nesting
    white
    sea birds
    scattered-
    hovered-
    yelled-
    dove-
    in-defense
    of-territory
     
     
    mallards
    periscoped
    orange
    ringed
    necks
    to-follow
      
    unfocused 
    mirages 
    appeared -
    disappeared -
    reappeared
     
    - as
    he
    chugged
    along
    the
    beach
    feeling
    the-way
    towards
    his
    markers
     
     
     
     

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    Rhymer commented on fog

    12-08-2009

    Loved this descriptive write. Your talented is being showcased in this piece, excellent write.

    mamasan commented on fog

    12-08-2009

    Ah, that is quite an itenerary when all you have is a raft, it looks like.....ah the symbol of the dove gives it away....its symbol pierces thru the facade of the so-called 'fog'......

    monkyntz commented on fog

    11-21-2009

    you paint a beautiful picture with your words it was like being there great job

    Mareann commented on fog

    10-12-2009

    Good job writing... unique, what is this style of poetry called?

    calijya commented on fog

    10-10-2009

    you remind me of Robert Frost. He could turn anything into poetry. Your poems are nothing like mine, but that's refreshing to me, because i'm not a fan of my own poetry anyway.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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