Foggy Daze

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Foggy Daze

A sweet, calm smile rests on my face,
But if you stare into my eyes,
Storm clouds billow and churn,
Tears glaze like rainy day skies.

I haven't seen the sun
Since I don't know when,
A misty gray shroud
Blocks and clouds my vision.

My life's been taken over
By a sadistic grandfather clock.
Time haunts and taunts me,
There's no way to keep up.

But if you ask me how I've been,
Invariably I'll look up and grin;
For what more is there to say
Besides, "Oh, I'm OK."

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trocka7 commented on Foggy Daze

06-16-2009

Are you really only 13?! Wow, evokes a lot of feeling, very well written....I can identify with you, and certainly could when I was 13. Thanks for sharing this

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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