For Ladyaries149

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    For women in abusive relationships

    For Ladyaries149

    It's way past time to tell that man what’s on your mind

    You want no misunderstanding once it's laid on the line

    You've met him half way that far as you're gonna come

    Relationship’s is about two, not a punching bag for one

    God didn’t create you to be a battering ram

    Least of all not to be slapped and slammed

    It could bring out the best in him, or the worst too

    Still as woman's you gotta do what you gotta do
    To keep you from leaving will promise anything
    In your heart you know nothing's gonna change

    If he doesn't agree, before he makes his play
    Bid him goodbye as a friend, then walk away

    Time will come when you'll look back someday
    but today isn't someday, so get far away

    Wish him the best of luck in his life to come

    You'll be okay; that what's done is done

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    ladyaries149 commented on For Ladyaries149

    02-16-2010

    Wow. I love your flow! I feel like an amatuer when I'm reading your poems! (And you should know that I mean that...I would never admit that to anyone! LoL I'm always the best! Haha haha!) Thank you for that! **Makin' me blush** Peace and blessings.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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