Foreplay for Four pt. 4

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A 2 year thought is finally over!!!

Foreplay for Four pt. 4

"Do you feel him?"
You respond with a nod.
"I feel him too."
Tears erupt from my eyes
And create lakes in the valleys of your collarbone,
Knowing this very moment was inspired by God,
Just waiting for me and you.
I breathe your release.
I'm nourished and relieved,
In the belief,
That this is our destiny.
I stretch my vessel deeply.
Exploring your cavern.
Feeling your love in it's entirety,
Truly does matter.
Because,
There's a star at your core,
That's my lantern.
Reaching for moons,
Attracted by the rings of your Saturn.
We collide.
We combine.
We scatter.
And kiss passionately to the sounds of fireworks.
"This feels so good, that it hurts."
Is all I could utter out of my lips.
We kiss.
You softly caress my face with the cusp of your fingertips.
We kiss.
All I can imagine are vines of orchids,
As we interlock our hips.
We kiss.
I couldn't have painted a more perfect picture,
Or even begun to envision this.
We kiss.
And fade away into a starry night,
On clouds of raindrops
And silence.

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janetdawson commented on Foreplay for Four pt. 4

03-26-2011

I can't even touch it.. You did that good. Wonderful work as always

Chi commented on Foreplay for Four pt. 4

12-04-2010

Good job my brother as always.........(smile). I........Chi.............Poetry

blackfootlady commented on Foreplay for Four pt. 4

11-27-2010

Hello Friend,Where Have You been.Did You Quit writing? I'd like to know why Friend?Someone that can write like this should not quit.God Bless-Black

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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