Forever In Love

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  • Lost Love
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  • Sadness
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  • Emotional

    Poem Commentary

    Lost love never dies unless the heart dies with it and through God our hearts are eternal...

    Forever In Love

    Remembering memories lost of time,
    Forgotten by the heart,
    Longing of forgiveness.

    Attached into the sorrow of the forever eternal past,
    Now realizing the pain caused by the dreadful present.

    Realizing feelings never before given,
    Lasting in a lost love never returning.

    Love never dies,
    But the heart is broken in dreams,
    In the horrid remembrance of the sight of the newly born dawn.

    The heart is now open,
    Realizing the never giving dreams,
    The heart lies open,
    But yet not spoken,
    In the dreams and memories,
    For a longing return.

    Forever lost,
    Forever in love…

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    Reality bites!!!

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    carynontherhine commented on Forever In Love

    07-27-2010

    oh too funny, reality bites. so you! lol this one another sad love. which one? Not sure. Beautiful write about the heart being open yet not spoken.Perfect wording throughout. Not as deep as others you have written and not hard at all to comprehend. Might be because love is deep but the ending surfaces. No two ways about it. I love it. So true about the ending of a relationship.
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    angel33614

    07/29/2010

    Reality does bite at times, you just have to learn to bite back, lol. This was my first true love and highschool sweet heart, susan. Many a long night thinking about the love that was not meant to be, still makes me sad. We had something really special, just wrong place and wrong time. Both so young, and her parents just wouldn't have it. Thanks again for the review and comments! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel aka your loving son

    carynontherhine commented on Forever In Love

    07-15-2010

    Oh J, you are a true poet! Your love poems bring me to my knees in loss at times. Whatever it is my darling that you are trying to say is superb in your style of writing and wording. I love this one! Caryn on the Rhine
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    Maleficent commented on Forever In Love

    06-24-2010

    a sincere write of angst and longing... wallow not... for if it was really meant to be then it would have been real... I threw the past on the pyre and Love found me again when I wasn't even lookin' ;) write on my angelic friend!
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    Rhymer commented on Forever In Love

    05-22-2010

    In dreams we find ourselves exposed as the mind and spirit run free. Totally out of control as we are free to love, destroy, and be hurt with out harm to our physical bodies. 10 on this fantastic write. Reality bites.
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