FOREVER TOGETHER!

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FOREVER TOGETHER!

In a waking moment.....
In the time .....
Of the sun to shine......
I stoped and prayed......

With no words but thought....
And I know He heard them....
Saw them....
And felt them.......

For I know I can't out think...
Out do......
Or anything of Him......
So I just sat and prayed....


He didn't answer.....
Was He asleep.......
No! He is just a lil busy.....
With 6 billion other souls......


So I told Him......
When you get the chance.......
Just let this one thing happen......
Let me and Her enjoy lifes lil dance.......
FOREVER TOGETHER!

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angel33614 commented on FOREVER TOGETHER!

06-22-2010

Beautiful poem filled with so much heartfelt emotion! I doubt God ever sleeps, and I very much doubt he didn't hear you. God hears and answers all prayers in due time. Sometimes when we think he isn't listening we find out it is us that is deaf to the truth of the light. I do hope your prayers are answered in due time! 6 billion souls are a lot to take care of but really he isn't watching over us but rather inside us, deep in the darknest shadows of ones inner heart is where you can find the brightest and purest of all lights, he hears all prayers for he lies deep within us all, this is the very origin of the soul... Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel

redbloodink

06/22/2010

ty Angel I know He is awake in us all the time...... I understand your comment to my deepths...... red

MarionYost commented on FOREVER TOGETHER!

06-21-2010

This is sweet Red, Very sweet. I hope your prayers are answered. :) All the best -Marion-

redbloodink

06/22/2010

ty Marion I hope your ok...... red

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