Forever Unfinished

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    Forever Unfinished





    So far away from you
    yet here within my thoughts
    I cannot escape
    for you have me like no other

    I am captive
    to an aura of light
    emanating from the spirit
    I have grown to know
    in my dreams

    I am a servant
    unable to resist
    the unyielding power
    of a thirst for your touch
    that overwhelms my thoughts
    and casts me into euphoria

    I am a warrior
    armed with a new will
    to find the inner depths
    of all you hold sacred
    and create infinity

    I am a dreamer
    smiling at the sun
    lifted from the darkness
    and given a chance
    to look existence in the eye
    finding where I fit in the world




     

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    wamomo commented on Forever Unfinished

    03-29-2010

    ...simply exquisite piece...the quiet strength and depth of affection that this write communicates is breathtaking...a place of deep beauty and soul moving emotion...

    sammia commented on Forever Unfinished

    02-27-2010

    Artie I love it, love it. truly amazing poet you are. My favorite part is "I am a dreamer smiling at the sun lifted from the darkness and given a chance to look existence in the eye finding where I fit in the world." That there is a great message to anyone. Loved it artie great job

    JadedJezzabel commented on Forever Unfinished

    01-29-2010

    bravo dear artie....for this simple as it is .......is a masterpiece.......love it

    koolmom0 commented on Forever Unfinished

    01-25-2010

    This is an awesome poem Artie. The flow and rythem is excellent. And you are right, somethings are forever unfinished. :) Kool

    redbloodink commented on Forever Unfinished

    01-25-2010

    let me say ..... well put together write...... I felt the passion..... red

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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