FOREVER

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    FOREVER

    Picture frames lie empty
    In the bottom of my closet
    Whilst i dream the same dream over and over
    Imagining a female who will offer a feminine touch
    Smoothing the rough edges of my masculinity
    I hate to sleep alone
    Though the peace and quiet are nice
    I'm able to ponder unbroken thoughts
    No hassles or interruptions to slow my mind
    A lady's scent i miss most of all
    The lack of causes me to feel beyond my age
    'Til i meet a kind friend with common interests
    She doesn't mind making love from within
    Conditions held aside
    No demands .. surrendering all
    I'll give in and hope she will too
    To the beauty of the elusive moments we'll create
    Excluding regrets
    Nary an inhibition to take anything away
    Forever

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    lunamarie commented on FOREVER

    11-01-2009

    Dear DC, ... upon reading the first lines ... I paused. I thought to myself ... I have empy picture frames too ... and ironically they lie in my closet ... becoming chipped, dusty, and old ... why is that?? ...... Luna

    Drivingczar

    11/01/2009

    Thank you LM for sharing your family photos also! *joking* Dczar

    Jewl commented on FOREVER

    09-04-2009

    Just beautiful! The more I read the more I can't get enough. Thank you for sharing. Jewl

    Drivingczar

    09/04/2009

    Thank you Jewl! Dczar ~ SBear

    Tempestlady commented on FOREVER

    07-09-2009

    this life demands we suffer through times of stillness and solitude, we learn to appreciate what we can, but it also gives us anticipation for what we are missing and motivates us to find it and fullfill ourelves. Something to look forward to. Very free thinker. Great Write.......

    Drivingczar

    07/10/2009

    Thank you Tempestlady! Dczar SBear

    Shunnie commented on FOREVER

    05-21-2009

    EXTREME BEAUTY. IF ONLY MORE MEN COULD THINK LIKE THAT WHETHER THEY'RE WITH SOMEONE OR NOT. I LOVE ALL OF YOUR POETRY.

    Drivingczar

    05/30/2009

    Thank you Shunnie for your kind comments! SBear

    jaggededge commented on FOREVER

    05-12-2009

    this poem is so blunt and drawn out i love it

    Drivingczar

    05/31/2009

    Thank you JEdge! SBear

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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