Forever

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    Forever

    Forever illusions of time flood my mind,one day im dead, one day im alive, im alive in the mind but never in time, im dead in the void that controls my life, for time and mind are seperated by life, Death is life in a differnt mind, Death will always be there controling our lives, forever in time, forever in mind....

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    jademelissa74 commented on Forever

    06-24-2009

    A beautiful truth! A well-written poem! Great job! .

    FiloRozzell commented on Forever

    04-28-2009

    Death is the one promise that will come for us all, so there is no need to worry or to look for it, death has it's time for all. There are 50 million ways to die but only 2 ways to live right or wrong. I love your words I absorb them and I'll read on for we rise and fall together.

    anaisnais commented on Forever

    04-20-2009

    Being stuck, trapped in such a situation must be heart reeling. No amount of comforting words can give you the strength you need to use this time to make memories for both you and your family. Show your place in time by choosing your words wisely, perhaps write a book in recognition of their time here on Earth, something that maybe others in similar situations can turn to for encouragement and comfort. If you cannot go it alone ask for other poets to collectively write and bring together a co

    bandit1192 commented on Forever

    03-02-2009

    Death will be waiting for you and for me. No use complaining, It's life's guarantee. TS

    beautifuldeath commented on Forever

    02-28-2009

    I think this has to be my favorite so far. although I love everyone of your poems. Fantastic... I tried to give it a 10 but it wouldn't let me.

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