Forever

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    Forever

    Hey baby don’t you know that I love you,

    I hope we’ll marry and I hope you say I do,

    After that we’ll have couple kids on the way to,

    So baby now its time,

    Just can’t wait no more,

    You’re the girl that I’ve been waiting for,

    And if you tell me yes (I love you),

    You are the very best (you are my boo),

    We’ll love like we never loved before,

    You the one I adore,

    Baby I can’t get you out of my mind,

    Everyday you make my sun-shine,

    You answered my prayers,

    I’ll give you my life I swear,

    It seems like your ready,

    So come on,

    I’m glad he put you in my life,

    Every time I look deep into your eyes,

    I can no longer hide the feelings that thrive,

    You look like an angel that’s in disguise,

    I’m glad you’re in my life,

    I’m glad you’re my wife,

    I want us to stay together,

    Forever and ever.

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    ashy commented on Forever

    08-29-2010

    I really enjoyed this poem. Nice goal and hope things work out well!!! Thanks for sharing.

    concience commented on Forever

    11-24-2009

    long time no hear my dude- looks like a lot has changed since i last commented on ur poem. well congrats my dude! and good write too.

    candicane88 commented on Forever

    06-26-2009

    awwww!!!!! how sweet. thats so cute. you know... i hope everything in your life goes just like this poem said... because... i honestly think you deserve it... and if this girl is real talk... dam... she has a nice man..

    Heatherjwill commented on Forever

    06-26-2009

    not bad not bad you seem like you have a goal, nice goal just dont settle for someone who will brake your heart

    cbp3216dawg

    06/26/2009

    thank you heather or commenting my poem..and yes ill follow your advice

    cottonluv commented on Forever

    05-31-2009

    awwwwwww this is do nice and sweet and beautiful i hope to find me a true love one day that feel this way about me

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