Forgetting you

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    Forgetting you

     I got up, this morning;
    and I saw your picture,
    I told my heart,to disenchant;
    "beat slowly else you will rupture"
    Its really really hard,to know;
    What was inside my heart's structure,
    I felt a pain, a bit insane;
    my life looked like a caricature,my easy going life,was in a mess;
    It was not less than a torture,
    It might end soon,like an eclipsed moon,
    My life is having complete fracture!!

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    optimistic commented on Forgetting you

    08-05-2009

    Different style of writing in which I like very painful words expressed emotionally across the page.
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    nangy commented on Forgetting you

    08-05-2009

    its not easy to forget someone who had a huge effect on you. beautifully written showing emotions that one goes through when you lose someone you love....
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    lips_unlocked

    08/09/2009

    thanx

    lips_unlocked

    08/09/2009

    thanx

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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