forgive me lover... (parts 1 & 2)

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forgive me lover... (parts 1 & 2)

forgive me lover for i have sinned
i have forsaken you again
to another i have turned my eye
and shared the thoughts within my mind


forgive me lover for i have sinned
i have shared my flesh again
yet again i have been touched
the temptation was just too much


forgive me lover for i have sinned
and renigged on my promises
the things i spoke and time thats blurred
and i have gone back on my word


forgive me lover for i have sinned
i am sorry but i did not intend
to open up old wounds again
forgive me lover for i have sinned


forgive me lover for i have sinned
i have flirted with the blade again
upon my flesh i felt the steel
antisipation i cannot conceal

forgive me love for i have sinned
i felt the blade upon my skin
simply guilty of bad intent
but i havent marked my skin again

forgive me lover... (part 2)
 
 "forgive him lover for he has sinned"
 the blade said with a hellish grin
 "blah blah blah...
 "with the promises and shit"


 "once again he is in my sights"
 "the seed is planted and he too weak to fight"
 "what i see is just a matter of time...
 "before he breaks and his flesh is mine"


 "upon his skin i will make my mark"
 "when hes all alone in the dark...
 "my temptation here is far too strong...
 "and he hasent played with me for so long...


 "once again it is time for me...
 "to help him bleed out his misery...
 the blade said with a terrible smirk...
 "just look a this miserable jerk"
 "he wants to do it the intent is there"
 "to deny himself would be unfair"
 "i am one of the things that he knows for sure"
 "that can offer relief without a cure"
 "hes thought about me the way he has"
 "the time weve shared and all the jazz"
 "within his head the thoughts are strong" 
 "its in his heart that he thinks its wrong"
 "he is so fucking soft" said the blade
 "and so scared that youll feel betrayed"
 "he knows exactly what he needs to do" 
 "and eventually he WILL follow through"
 "as i said his intent is there"
 "he has already ignited this affair"
 "might as well come out to play"
 "come on dano just say ok!"
the blade smiled an evil grin
and whispered in my ear again
"this is not the end and you see"
"you havent heard the last from me"...
 

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MindNumbing commented on forgive me lover... (parts 1 & 2)

01-07-2010

**sigh** Poetically speaking, this is terrifying. Personally speaking, even more so. Personification of such an evil craving, I fear will only feed it. Wake up and take a look around at those around you, and not just the betrayed lover.

WordSlinger commented on forgive me lover... (parts 1 & 2)

01-07-2010

I have to say this is hardcore intense whooo, Dano, do not even attempt such desire, Spring will be here soon, WS

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Dano’s Poems (150)

Title Comments
Title Comments
from an angels view 19
searching the darkness 10
a letter from santa 14
thanksgiving (acrostic) 12
the depth of... 11
ive wished 7
absentee 12
this is... 13
a journey into the dark 7
the cold of november 14
your voice 12
the yin to the yang 14
twisted 9
autumn 14
i think it happened again 11
luna~tic 19
the darkness 13
a blinding eclipse 16
the universe... 18
the wind of sorrow 14
my sorrow weeps 16
where but the dark... 12
immortal kiss 47
in a darkened room 17
our mother 7
within these flames 12
nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock 7
behind wrought iron bars 25
what i write (part 2) 8
today 17
the world in grey 6
the reality of... 5
in the shadow of a mountain 6
nothing will ever be the same 10
of cemetary dreams (and nightmare scapes) 12
next to a bed... 18
but... 15
at a funeral 12
seventeen (acrostic) 11
the fortunate one(s) 7
what did i do... 24
ashes to dust 45
dancing in the moonlight 14
disempowering the pain 14
the butterfly 10
what i write 14
sorry (i killed the after glow) 11
the humidity rises (an erotic tale) 9
pieces of light 8
the sad pumpkin &... 9
my face 12
for a long time... 14
(an explination of) distractions 6
tell me... 6
the charelston cookie tin 9
silent self destruction 8
exposed 13
the means of the day (a true valentines poem) 2
a poem about nothing... 8
blood bleeds black 7
dissecting myself 3
i will be just fine 3
the stacking of bricks 3
the complexities of depression... 4
spirits & ghosts 3
**random chaos** 2
bloodlust 3
...somethings missing... 2
15 years... 3
beauty sleeps entombed (parts 1 & 2) 3
**untitled** 2
the overstuffed closet 3
the candy dish 2
anxiety speaks 2
**untitled** 2
myself and the light 6
the fog 2
fire and tears 3
cerebral meltdown 3
sometimes i wish... 1
drawing strength from a starr... 2
disappointmen
t...
1
**untitled** 1
the flower garden 3
nature... 1
reaching out 2
the dark and the light... 1
the insistent demon 2
sorry... 3
forgive me lover... (parts 1 & 2) 2
im so sorry... 3
**no title... just random thoughts** 1
to eternity... 2
winter wind whips... 1
tired 2
lucid dream 1
the rains came... 2
the mourning light 1
another jagged pill 1
i just cant... 1
entitlement?!
?!?
1
entitlement!!
!!
1
burning within 4
inside of me 1
projected pain 1
the night... the dakness & the truth? 1
panic 2
the mourning fog 1
when the fires burn 1
through the night 1
shadow casts 0
a mournful rain 1
i cant protect me 2
my comfort place 0
an echo shifts 1
the monster 2
welcome to my life 0
the past is alive... 1
... 1
standing on the edge 2
my smile... 1
anxiety 2
my reality 0
another view... 0
untitled... 0
jagged pill 2
in the dark 1
what to do 1
how can i... 1
life... 3
a crust of pain 1
keeping me weak... 2
my dark world 3
another night of wondering 2
in the attic 4
i hold most dear 2
the me inside of me 2
another day 1
dreamed in a dream 2
a year in the life (dealing with death) 1
i look... 1
where my secrets are kept 1
a mouthful of words 2
i will not fear (when my eyes are blind) 2
i am aware (i'm already dead) 7
standing in the silence of my own shadow... 3
a blinding dark 1
growing pain 3
the longest of nights 5
... 7