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    Forgiveness lost

     

    Storms raged with the rods of Thor

    As what right in front of them

    Stood….

    Staring so innocently up

    Wanting so much to be looked at

    Harmonies noted symphonies raised

    Hallelujah false redemption in form

    They grew to be 100 feet tall

    Almost to the sun of Ra

    But still sat quietly at their feet

    The miracle to end all miracles

    As the Giants reached down

    Of Olympus’s mount

    To touch Zues’s throne

    They remember when and what they put aside

    But now it’s a long hard fall

    They peered below

    To find the love

    Only to spy on a box

    A box square empty of cheap card board

    A reminder of forgiveness lost.

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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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