Forgiveness

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Forgiveness

Forgiveness

Happiness, is only in fairytales

But for this fairytale it doesn't exist

The absince of emotion leave an emotion

An emotion in which was undecribable

Till she was born

Her thin white hair sillouets her pigmentless face

Her eyes so dim and red

Her name was Forgiveness

She was and aqward child

She never had friends

One day a girl aproched her

The girl was 1 year younger

This girls name was Acceptence

The girls became great friends

One day the two girls were playing

Forgiveness was very happy

She let go of her frown and gave alittle giggle

She knew she had sinned

The sky opened up

Acceptence was struck by lightning

The parents blamed Forgiveness

She blame herself

Everytime she got happy something bad would happen

No one ever died again... but no one ever got close

Soon she learned to lose emotion

To protect the ones she loved

As years past she forgot her love

She was now just a walking hollow

She said that nothing felt like something

This something can only be described as understanding

This understanding happened by watching others

She saw them smile and laugh and be human

She soon realized if she can not do the same she holds no purpose

She understood there was no room in life for a hollow corpse

She later on climbed the stairs to the roof and leeped

Roomer has it she was found smiling on the cement below

Maybe she had seen Acceptence in her last momnets of life

Maybe it was a glimpse at the future

That made her emotion happiness form a smile

Some people claim they can hear the two girls laughing from the beyond

This absence of emotion is now called forgiveness

To not judge someone by their flaw is now called acceptence

Forgiveness and Acceptence may have die but will live on forever

Like I said happy ending only exist in fairytales

But some say fairytales exist in the after life

As for Forgiveness and Acceptence I hope this is ture <3

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Brianandhiscats commented on Forgiveness

09-14-2012

Oh that was an unhappy poem. It takes me back to when I was a teenager, half a century ago! A poem that helps you to recall your own pain is a good poem. Well done. X

AlisRed

09/14/2012

Thank you :)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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