Forgotten

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    Forgotten

    I can't just spit
    in a hurry shit
    as punctual as this.
    Biding my time,
    line by line,
    sip by sip
    of a cold Heineken.
    Checking the sign again;
    Though, I already know
    I am heading in the right direction.
    Imperfection is as natural
    as holiness is not;
    Cause if you leave it on the vine
    for quite some time
    it starts to rot.
    While others find I pay no mind
    I take in quite a lot;
    Words don't come to just anyone...
    Outspokenness is just a curse
    or blessing that I got;
    Analytical conclusions
    overflowing from my pen...
    Though I try a million times
    to shut my eyes
    they just keep opening again;
    Though I know that now is not the time
    for the sake of all unspoken crimes
    I just keep wondering
    -when-
    the truth you seek to find
    don't waste your time
    reading public documents, my friend...
    Try Alice Bailey or Anais Nin
    and if you're not convinced;
    I'm sorry about your issues with doubt
    but the truth may be to difficult
    for you to comprehend;
    See-
    It doesn't really matter what you did here
    in the end...
    If the losers never lost,
    how would the winners ever win?
    And eventually,
    like everything else,
    you will be forgotten.

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    HarverTomsson commented on Forgotten

    06-05-2009

    That cocky arragance reminds me of someone familiar. Haven't seen him lately though. Just remember: an untenable premise will always yield an warrented conclusion. Pick cerefully your arbiters of truth, they may be wrong, after all. but I just loved your cheeky opening.

    MizBlaze

    06/10/2009

    Too many big words, dawg... I can't understand your comment cus I'm too retarded to read. But you figured as much, right? In English please, cus I'm not about to pull out a dictionary. But I do get your basic point. You think my ego is big...WRONG. You misinterpreted the meaning here... But thanks for reading and commenting all the same.

    monkyntz commented on Forgotten

    03-31-2009

    another good one

    MikeSiZaChrist commented on Forgotten

    03-30-2009

    well said

    Insite commented on Forgotten

    12-11-2008

    ya I read this one its good I feel a little like a cheat all of my current post are verses I wrote. Nothing new.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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