forme ??
God created the world in 7 days. Made adam and eve and theirs a talking snake slithering threw the trees like a devious species. Offers a apple to eve she says "for me?".. For me this is way too hard to believe a fucking apple is responsible for my open mind and free thinking .I'll pluck that bitch rite off the tree eat it myself for my creativity. For me I like to think deeply about things the bibles not enough but kinda interesting .Makes no sense but its not all bullshit theirs a few liturgies that really struck me as deep. Revelations 16:16 "God will intervene and destroy the armies of the Antichrist as predicted in the biblical prophecy".....Thats a pretty fucking cool story..... But i believe in what i see in my dreams.. Showing a twisted version of our brutal ending. Theirs no comparison to what i see after pickles and beans and late night drinking on main street and alittle trees .Make ya shit in your bed sheets .........forme ??
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knight4696 commented on forme ??
02-18-2010
- Glub - You certainly can convey a message, can't ya? :) Believe or not to believe is a personal choice. I see your 8 yrs of catholic school and church every Sunday and Raise ya .. Parents raised me Strict Catholic ,, My Mom, Head of the Catholic Daughters association in our Parish and taught Catacysm class in our home 2 times a week. My Dad, Knights of Columbus and a Church Usher .. And yes Church every Sunday as well. I hear where your coming from, trust me bro! lol! I am not a highly religious man even with it being forced on me for many years .. But I do believe in God. I too write quite a bit of Dark Poetry. Some are quite Evil in fact .. but just beacause I like to play in the dark doesn't mean I don't live in the light. :) I like your "in your face" style though - as I have said on your other writes Powerful and Raw! :) Ken
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redbloodink commented on forme ??
12-27-2009
- This write reminds me of thoughts within myself a few years ago..... I didn't understand much of the bible... and to be honest I probably didn't understand any of it...... I read the bible as Hope had said for me and no-one else..... it took a few times from cover to cover....... God says in His word... " Study to find yourself approved" not by man but by Him..... You see God loves us all the same with no indifference... I think that is powerful and over whelming...... But He is the same today as He was yesterday and will be forever more.... He made us with the freedom of choice He made us for Himself.... He don't want us to war or do anything against one another... He also said " He is all and all".... That means He is in each of us and what we do to one another we are doing it to Him.... I just wanted to say as well.... there is nothing wrong with questioning the existence but we have to remember that we do exist...... So the possibility is greater that He is more real then me!!!!!!!!!! red
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HopeOhlarik commented on forme ??
10-31-2009
- i agree with clift, you have to study the book to completely understand it. read it from cover to cover sometime, it will all make sense then. its hard to believe all the stories that are locked away in the Bible, but thats where having faith comes in. just remember we all have a choice to believe or not, its up to you which side of the fence you stand on.
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11/20/2009
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10-31-2009
- This isn't really my taste, but good nonetheless. Not great, but good. As a Christian this is disturbing to me. But i'm looking at your form and past my beliefs. It's choppy. i don't feel any flow here. But it was a good write.
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cliftondurant commented on forme ??
10-30-2009
- glub you told it how you see it take little time and try to understand the book is deep man i enjoy the read
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