Forsaken Haiku

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    Forsaken Haiku

    In my dream, we fly
    Over countries in the sky
    Watching nature die

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    Tempestlady commented on Forsaken Haiku

    12-10-2010

    I have one called polar bears. You would really appreciate it i think as much as i appreciated this. Well done, and loved the pic.

    danmartyjake1 commented on Forsaken Haiku

    02-28-2010

    This is a great one, too. I enjoyed the feelings that came with it as I read it. It has a universal quality. Very nice write!

    BringMeBullets commented on Forsaken Haiku

    01-07-2010

    This is sad. If nature is lost, then so is everything else. But how beautiful this is. In fact, I think I will try to write a poem like this to add to my collection. Great write. :)

    Rhymer commented on Forsaken Haiku

    12-23-2009

    More of a nightmare I think, to loose nature is to lose ourselves. Excellent Haiku leads one to think about more than themselves 10 from me.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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