Forsaken?

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    Forsaken?

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    Forsaken

    There could have  been some mistake

    You know, when you said you loved me.

    I mean, it actually didn't sound fake,

    But, are you sure you were talking to me?


    I willl have to leave and come back, dear,

    For I fear that I'm heading for sorrow,

    I must be sure your words are perfectly clear.

    So, can we talk again on the 'morrow?


    In the past, I was always so assured,

    But, I was dealt the losing hand.

    Then, after some crying, I was lured

    Into taking my head out of the sand.


    Again, I gave love another try.

    If you want to be happy you must bend,

    Love again, hurt again, I just cry.

    To this comedy, invitations, I'll send.


    Over time the hurt seems to lessen.

    Over time, I feel better, but, then,

    I meet you, and must make a confession

    I have fallen for someone again.


    It is you who has stolen my heart.

    Is it you who will be my new love?

    Speak up now, you must do your part,

    In this tragedy, this comedy, called LoVe.


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    winterkou commented on Forsaken?

    09-03-2010

    Even though we all lose love we tend to find it again. Sometimes the second or third time around is worth the wait.

    philjonesin commented on Forsaken?

    07-26-2010

    Beautifully written poetry lady. keep it up. If you wish check out my stuff it is, a lot of it, about the same issues.

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Forsaken?

    07-21-2010

    that was a very touching love poem dear, I loved it, sometimes we have to take that leap of faith to find our true love. I hope you found yours, keep writing love asha

    ladynight commented on Forsaken?

    07-14-2010

    i must confess i have felt this same way many times. been hurt so many times. then u find someone new and dare to hope they will be the one, but like so many others they just find some way to hurt you. it sucks that to find love u must keep putting yourself out there to chance getting hurt. but alas it is the only way to find something true. a wonderful write mandi.

    Artie commented on Forsaken?

    07-14-2010

    It never goes away or gets any easier. We are a slave to the quest for love our entire lives -- 10 from me

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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