Please critique my poem
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Please critique my poem
Hard to Love
You're not an easy man to love
Even with those eyes bluer than the skies above
I had just begun to think we'd be fine
Now I'm almost certain you'll never be mine.
I feel the harder I try the harder you try to push me away
Yet I won't give up on you, try as I may.
Waiting to hear from you my stomach ties in knots,
Wondering how often or how little I'm in your thoughts.
Is the only time you think of me is when I hear from you?
Oh the answer to this I wish I knew.
But as hard as you can make loving you be,
It seems to come so naturally for me.
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RE: Please critique my poem
This poem indeed reveals a girl's mind
When I was a young man, no Internet
No cell or no proper information at all
We were in the dark about a woman
We were blinded by many Injustices
Thank God, now a woman can express
Her feelings, she can boldly convey
I love this poem and enjoyed it truly.
mvvenkataraman
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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.
Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.