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Ticks and Tocks
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RE: Ticks and TocksHi, I noticed in your second verse, you first and third lines don't rhyme, but they do in all the other verses. |
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RE: Ticks and TocksGuess I thought "lived" and "chill" were close enough. Don't really remember why I left it that way. Thanks for the notice. |
When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA