Fostered notice of human happiness!

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    I have lived in foster care for many years. The way i "explain" things to people is so oftenly misinterpreted that I flt inclined to share this piece. I feel as if my "points" in conversation are too few I think too much sometimes so thoughts spill out... Haha hope you enjoy the read, thanks and peace, ~Sam

    Fostered notice of human happiness!

     I noticed today
    How my sanes came to be
    I saw with eyes
    Ojo's
    Freedom I was taught
    Through distraust minds we faught
    Not "knowing" music
    Through the ears of a poem I sought out this answer
    The passion to play,
    TO DANCE SHOUT AND SCREAM
    This happiness I have found in our pocket
    The smiles we give
    to we who seek
    Here in Amer'ica
    Strange smiles fade fast
    Forever forgetting
    The blast from mankinds past
    Overdone by one tracked minds "mine to behold" Ours to dig down unrefined Truths lying to the underlined texts
    People?
    From birth one nation
    Brought forth to dream in his dreamed box
    From points askew
    we live outsidddee
    Points viewed for flower blooms
    Symbols are too deep
    Assumptions...
    In my humble opinion
    ARE
    INDEED
    Crude in nature
    Forever lost
    Grows however profoundly
    Going to Knowhere
    Now rowing in american human history
    OUr brain boxed ocean tied repulsion
    motionsickness
    A brain mal-notioned
    ....'Breathe'(exhale here)

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    ginga commented on Fostered notice of human happiness!

    02-18-2010

    trail, Masterfully penned. A message to all on the ills of what our society suffers due to our controlled political structure that would jail the rebels and revolutionaries, instead poetry is our outlet...yes I did breathe at the end. Profound and true! ginga
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    WordSlinger commented on Fostered notice of human happiness!

    02-13-2010

    this is fascinating, I love this, saved to favorites, ty WS
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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