Fragile lifetime


  • Life

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    Read and let your mind enjoy playing with words

    Fragile lifetime

    Colors spin
    Drops and drips
    Circles with tips
    Frayed edges
    Grey ledges
    Small wedges
    Blue shaes
    White rays
    A sunlit haze
    Orange blades
    Slice the skies
    A secret surprise
    Hides behind

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    Kingwebstar commented on Fragile lifetime


    I would have named this the colors of our lives. Great job though.I am glad to see you here. Love Da KinG

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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