Freak

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Freak

You call me a freak,
A waste of your time,
Because I'm not like you,
Don't act like it's a crime,
To be myself,
With my own unique style,
I'm like a mosaic,
Pieced together with tile...

You look down on me,
Like I'm not quite as good,
But, I just don't care,
And it's not like I should,
Because I am me,
And I won't change for you,
Or for anyone else,
You should be yourself too...

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dustydai commented on Freak

08-15-2009

Very good, always be y ourself, and from what I've read of your work, that's a good place to be.

kochab commented on Freak

08-15-2009

very formal and direct keli, great work, stand in the way of adversity and force it to accept you, dont step aside for it so it may pass by without knowing you first.

kellygirl70 commented on Freak

08-02-2009

Dude, very Cool. I really like this. I just registered on this site so I'm going to check out more later but I did read that one before signing off and wanted to say I totally dig it. Oh by the way this is kellygirl70 nothing on yet there will be though-).

laydbak1 commented on Freak

06-25-2009

That's tellin' em'.... They need a piece o' your mind... You go girl.......

kmooney commented on Freak

05-26-2009

Keli, I liked this poem. The message is strong. It's important to be accepting of one's self even if you are looked down upon. Stand up for what you believe and be yourself. People should like you for who you are and if they don't, that's their problem. Read my poem, Don't Pretend. It is similar in it's message. You are a good writer. I enjoy reading your work.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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