Free-Styled Mind

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    Free-Styled Mind

    “Free-styled Mind"

     

    The mind is an odyssey not well explained in humanology

    But yet a toy at will to fulfill all of life’s prodigies.

    Damn how so modest of me, to speak such terminology

    To hear prospective thoughts that would leave adherence to all of mankind prophecies.

    I know this cannot be me; I copy thee... all the above mention is not me phenomenally.

    But from life’s choices; I tried to avoid them, still I’m left in all its monopoly.

     

     

    Last few years; man I swear, was nothing more than little worth to me

    So much strain to reach a little gain with nothing more then adversities.

    That’s why I purposely hold glory and sole to keep, all life’s treasures (existence) to be held high like a third degree.

    I’m focally schooled to use them tools that bring a better approach of me.

     

    Withered away from decay the last decade of what suppose to be.

    An existence made from time until its prime full of poetry

    A root beyond its grave that has saved us all culturally

    I’m quite afraid ‘til today, of what is next and that dispose of me

    And re-create a triumph made and paved the way to one that speaks HOPELESSLY.

     

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    JamilahAyanna commented on Free-Styled Mind

    01-27-2010

    Pleez tell me dis is in da contest cuz dis is madd hot 4real. U got such a nyce flo about ya words and dis keeps a nyce steady rhythm...I love it :)

    PoeticMind

    01/31/2010

    thank you i do appreciate your thought as well

    redbloodink commented on Free-Styled Mind

    01-26-2010

    I liked the flow the rhythm is on time..... I think this write explains how life can mold us as well as how you see life... great creativity..... red

    Ceelee commented on Free-Styled Mind

    11-19-2009

    great job mr philly! happy birthday to you too! See you are a fellow scorpio! yeah! Lol great work keep it coming

    PoeticMind

    11/20/2009

    Thank you Maam.. and you enjoy your special day as well SISTAH.. Peace

    mamasan commented on Free-Styled Mind

    11-15-2009

    This poem definitely speaks to hope and its obvious the wordsmith is much at ease with one of the tools....the tool of words. And, I would say these words that flow, seemingly effortlessly, are the sign of a good wordsmith.

    MagicRock commented on Free-Styled Mind

    10-08-2009

    Hadn't read anything new from you in a while, but this is on point! Great poem. Very fluid and full of life. Keep on writing & hit me up when u get a chance to catch me up to speed on other things.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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