Free To Do What You Want

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    Free To Do What You Want
    I know what you’re planning to do
    I could read your mind and feel it
    Deception is about to start
    And it’s tearing me apart

    Go ahead…you are free!
    You get to do what your heart is telling you to be
    You don’t care anyway
    To what I feel…that’s okay

    Then you would know and realize soon
    What my curse would be
    And you’re the one who’ll lose…..

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    DavidRayy commented on Free To Do What You Want

    08-07-2009

    HE DID LOSE..............Y.L.L.I.W................
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    freind commented on Free To Do What You Want

    05-31-2009

    i liked this very much to know the thoughts of what someone is thinking when we know the thoughts of someone we are in ther head very good
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    DrEaMeR94 commented on Free To Do What You Want

    05-22-2009

    ur words are very meaning full!!! why most of your poems are about disapointments ? was it something you really went through?
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    phoenixhope

    05/27/2009

    Yes...pretty most of my life....writing is my only outlet...i don't drink nor smoke nor go out and party...i just write out my sorrows away! thanks for your comment!

    SEVEN commented on Free To Do What You Want

    05-21-2009

    whoa...heavy..remind me not to cross u i like it....dang i gotta enter 100 characters? how is that?
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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