Freedom from evil!

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It is the hue and cry of the mankind suffering with crime, violence, atrocities,struggle and many problems caused by the people themselves under the influence of evil. God assures the destruction of the world and evil and salvation to those who convert and repent their sins.

Freedom from evil!

The souls opened

Their viscera to check up

If there is any life left in at all!

As punished by their own pupils

The eyes were piercing

Into the sky

With an appeal to open

The heavens so that

The archaic earth

Would be fixed for ever!

 

How long the partially

Living souls can live here,

As were held up in an asylum

Where the enemies

In number are multiplying

To capture the world

And to craft it as their haven;

 

The spirit from the above,

Highly angry and powerful

Scarcely allow the defeat

Of His children’s life,

And sent the military to

Motivate and complete

The souls to begin the war

And close it in victory;

 

The ships of Noah from

The oceans below are

Arriving to the shores

Of the lovely land to

Load up the children’s rooms

Of vivid nature,

And leaving the emptiness

To prison the evil;

 

Naught to worry absolutely

About the omitted treasures!

Staple food, sacred cloths,

And lively houses and precious

Riches available in plenty

In the heavens for all!

Now, no pains of life and prison

Yet, blessed to rest in peace and joy

For endless and Time less time!

 

                    - R K CHOWDARY

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Coltsfan777 commented on Freedom from evil!

03-06-2011

very well written!! Love the illustration you use and the passion at which you write with. You have such a high level of creativity and your faith really reflects through your poems.

RKCHOWDARY11

03/07/2011

Hi Dear Coltsfan777 Thank you again for your praising comment. I am HINDU convert into Christianity. I have trust in JESUS and I don't write from the point of religion. What ever is the religion, this is the fact. Are we not suffering in the war with defeats in the world. Many religious manics may not believe it. I believe in our GOD who has been very clear with his promises to his children. But, we have to live in his spirit helping him to keep up his promises. Am I right? I would like to request you to let your friends also read my poems so that they may also know as as much as you are and may be of mutual help because we are friends. I too will read your poems and write my comments soon. With love RKC

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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