Friendly Understanding!

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    So sad but true this is my life and what I do, I just can't believe it now! Interestingly enough, one would swear that this poem was written by a kind friend. . . No, no this is not the case I asssure you! This poem was written in third person by me to a friend that I was talking to at the time!

    Friendly Understanding!

    Mike Wilson: I HATE MY LIFE!
    Tumble: Mike, I am scared for you...... for i have watched your brown eyes turn black.....I have watched your true heart turn from real to stone and from that to CAST Iron.... I have watched you quit on everything that you now live for nothing! I have watched you bleed and cry and there was yet again nothing I could do. Tumble: and Interestingly enough, I have watched you both fall and preveil. I have watched you do both good and evil! I have watched you question both your religion and your sexuality. I have watched you make me laugh, smile and cry! I have watched you be calm and really, really pissed off! Mike Wilson: That's nice Tumble..... But...... Tumble: Shut up and read darn it! I have watched you have your heart broken everytime you thought you found love, and now I know why you say you quit on it!

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    Ravoya commented on Friendly Understanding!

    05-24-2009

    wow that's really good. i can understand a lot of what is going on in your mind here. and i feel the same sometimes
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    USAPoet2010

    09/13/2011

    Awe, the one thing I refer to when I question who I currently am! This poem reminds me of how God sees me, always through Loving eyes and never adbandoning us!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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