Friendly Understanding!


Poem Commentary

So sad but true this is my life and what I do, I just can't believe it now! Interestingly enough, one would swear that this poem was written by a kind friend. . . No, no this is not the case I asssure you! This poem was written in third person by me to a friend that I was talking to at the time!

Friendly Understanding!

Mike Wilson: I HATE MY LIFE!
Tumble: Mike, I am scared for you...... for i have watched your brown eyes turn black.....I have watched your true heart turn from real to stone and from that to CAST Iron.... I have watched you quit on everything that you now live for nothing! I have watched you bleed and cry and there was yet again nothing I could do. Tumble: and Interestingly enough, I have watched you both fall and preveil. I have watched you do both good and evil! I have watched you question both your religion and your sexuality. I have watched you make me laugh, smile and cry! I have watched you be calm and really, really pissed off! Mike Wilson: That's nice Tumble..... But...... Tumble: Shut up and read darn it! I have watched you have your heart broken everytime you thought you found love, and now I know why you say you quit on it!

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Ravoya commented on Friendly Understanding!


wow that's really good. i can understand a lot of what is going on in your mind here. and i feel the same sometimes



Awe, the one thing I refer to when I question who I currently am! This poem reminds me of how God sees me, always through Loving eyes and never adbandoning us!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

USAPoet2010’s Poems (15)

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