Friends and Lovers

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 A poem about love and relationships...

Friends and Lovers


Friends and Lovers


To close my eyes and think of you,
is exactly what I love to do.
I see the smile upon your face
the shimmer in your eyes is just a taste,
of the warmth I feel when I'm with you.

You have a heart of gold,
always longing to please.
Your very passionate kisses
make me weak in the knees.

I knew from the first moment
that I laid eyes on you,
this is going to be good
and you knew it too.

From the very first nibble
we were both hooked,
bait line and sinker,
that's all it took.


By: Mary Ann Eaton
(2009)

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StandingBear commented on Friends and Lovers

11-28-2009

Quite a nice friend/lover relationship you've shared.

Mareann

11/28/2009

Thank you kindly SB

countrypoet commented on Friends and Lovers

10-21-2009

This poem speaks of a woman,who has experienced the joy of finding true love and the simple pleasures that go with it.Nicely done.

Mareann

10/21/2009

Thank you, I appreciate all the good things, big and small in my life. thanks for reading and commenting. mary a. Eaton http://mareannspoetry.ning.com

Stryx commented on Friends and Lovers

10-11-2009

S nice tender and passionate connection. I liked it.

Mareann

10/11/2009

I'm happy, thank you for commenting. Mary

freespirit75 commented on Friends and Lovers

10-01-2009

mary i enjoyed this poem also, our writing styles are simular. thanks again.

Mareann

10/01/2009

I thank you kindly, I will read more from you and return the favor. have a good day, mareann

wildpendigus commented on Friends and Lovers

08-08-2009

Very good I must say, from a musical standpoint this would rate high because of the lyrical content, although the title is somewhat unique also, I have written a song similar and produced and wrote by me, so here again shows a lot of talent! WP grecowong@yahoo.com

Mareann

08/09/2009

Ahhw thanks, I could sing this one too, but it might be scary, lol... I love poetry, romance, angels, and i love to share love , hope and joy. I thank you, I will read your posts as well. Have a great evening, Mary

Mareann

09/29/2009

I'd like to hear your song, has it been released to the public?

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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