Froggy

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 You were a great friend to me, I will never forget you,
 Mary

Froggy

nineteen sixty-six
country's in a fix

eye's a glaze
life's a daze

hate the war
smoke some more

had a brother
then-- no more

sat on the floor
drank some more...

can't remember
that much more


May your soul rest in peace, where-ever you may be.
remembering the sixties!

Tags: friend, life, lost, sixty's

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HarverTomsson commented on Froggy

12-01-2009

It is true, some wounds of life end up fatal, after all. this kind of collateral damage the military never counts. Terse, powerful, pointed, wistful. You fill a lot with a little.

Mareann

12/01/2009

Will you join me on my websites-- http://mareannspoetry.ning.com -- mary'sbridge.ning.com---please share your poetry with my members, Please, Mary

FranzJ commented on Froggy

11-29-2009

sorry about your brother - happy you are able to write about it

Mareann

11/29/2009

Thank you kindly for reading and commenting on my poem. i really appreciate it. Mary

StandingBear commented on Froggy

11-28-2009

A fine tribute work you've crafted pertaining to a 60's friend. Uncanny resemblance to a younger Bob Dylan.

Mareann

11/28/2009

Thank you, actually the photo is a younf Dylan, I do not have a picture of Froggy, but they could have passed for twins. I'm glad you liked the poem. Thanks, mary

dahlusion commented on Froggy

11-26-2009

A lovely poetic creation in memory of a friend…Beautiful!!

Mareann

11/26/2009

Thank you for reading and commenting, he was a great friend. Mary

mamasan commented on Froggy

11-17-2009

Sadness revisited and loss because of another war. Ah, I just hate that word.....WAR..... Postscript: I still know veterans bearing the scars, both in body and mind, and what did they get. Nada And, the wars continue. I loved those servicepeople but felt that war was resources lost. The most valuable of all resources: humanity

Mareann

11/17/2009

This poem is about a boy i went to high school with, his older brother was killed in Vietnam, he was so sad, that he did so many drugs, he finall overdosed, and then he was gone too. So sad. Thanks for all your comments. Mary

mamasan

11/24/2009

and, Mary, a lot of our boys came home from Vietnam hooked on drugs...what a travesty...I try to remember what you always say...one at a time we have to change things for the better; one at a time May our Lord say 'basta' something my mom used to say when things got too sad or confusing...

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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