Fuck You

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  • xdavidabramx
  • tear the petals off of you, make you tell the truth // Hole

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God, I was really, really, really mad when I wrote this!!! xoxo!!! It's mostly just me venting, nothing serious I would never consider this like in a book or something!!!

Fuck You

Some people just don't understand Fuck them I only have love for those who love me Nothing but hate for those who hate me Fuck them So many unspoken insults I only wish I could mutter Let alone scream to their fuck faces They're not pretty If they were pretty people, I could understand But they're so goddamned ugly God did not make them Fuck them Stupid bitches Fuck them other bitches I only need one Fuck them Stupid bitches Think that they know me So goddamned stupid Fuck them Who needs them? Who really loves them? They're not whole. They're not like me, because I am complete I have someone who loves me Fuck them other bitches Stupid bitches Fuck them

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Platti commented on Fuck You

06-06-2009

wow Buxembenz is a jerk and a half, poetry isn't about eloquent meanings or falsifying feelings through extravagant metaphors or similes, the good poems are always the raw ones, the ones that are painfully so, that they always strike the heart of the reader even if they haven't or aren't currently feeling like the writer, I think that it is a pretty good write, not to fond of the F word, but I find it can explain a lot of things at times ;) it's good that you seem to use poetry as an outlet, good write, keep at it. 10

xdavidabramx

06/06/2009

Thank you! Yeah, I agree, it's good I don't do certain other things to vent; and that the f word can explain a lot sometimes (I'm not really a huge cusser, only when the occasion calls for it) and writing things like this is just so much more harmless and and less painful than say, slashing my wrists or sticking my head in an oven, don't you think?

Buxembenz commented on Fuck You

06-03-2009

get rid of it! not at all poetry. Enough of the word FUCK! Look in the mirror. Maybe your the stupid bitch!

xdavidabramx

06/05/2009

LOL yeah I am pretty much!!!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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