Future Poetry

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    Haiku poem. I am reading a book on how to write poetry. This author says to use nouns and verbs, and forget adjectives. Then I read Longfellow. I guess he did not get her message.

    Future Poetry

     

    Future Poetry

     

    don't let thought be cloud

    old edicts deter the mind

    let fly free the words!

     

    -EinStud

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    blueberry commented on Future Poetry

    03-25-2010

    An inspirational and yet refreshing poem!..................
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    EinStud

    03/25/2010

    Yes, and thank you! I let my words fly free a bit too often (not in anger, just saying what's on my mind without consideration to where I am). Once while in the Ukraine a sales clerk asked me why I was not purchasing the CCCP jersey I was contemplating. I started to say, "Are you kidding? I'm not communist. I'm an American". THANK GOD my words got hung up somewhere between my brain and my mouth. It was a rare moment.)

    icu2 commented on Future Poetry

    03-25-2010

    Your best yet, my friend. ............................................ten.
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    EinStud

    03/25/2010

    You are too kind. I guess one advantage to the haiku poem is that a person can read a few of them, and not get too bored. (It is my achilles heel to always be observing)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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