Generation fire

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  • EinStud
  • I'm off break, and will be getting to the mail this week. Peace Out, Gary

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A response to WordSlingerII's poem, "The office of fire".

Generation fire


 

Generation fire

 

time is ending!

it has never ended yet

predictions live on

 

-EinStud

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WordSlinger commented on Generation fire

04-25-2010

I like this Ein, nice, you should start a class, you have lots of wisdom, ty WS

EinStud

04/26/2010

This poem was born from your head. I tried to apply your thought (The Office of Fire), and adapt it to my view of the world. The best way to learn, is to teach. But I have good luck not being tied to anything.

EinStud commented on Generation fire

04-12-2010

When Shakespeare was alive, did he write poetry 600 years or more prior to his being? Did he write, "oonga boonga" in hopes to achieve some fulfillment? No. He wrote words that were contemporary for his time. If you do the same, in about 600 years or more you too can be popular. I think "meaning" is the most important part of the poem. Not rhyme schemes. Not spelling. Not a lot of things.

EinStud

04/12/2010

Thank You Aria.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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