GENESIS FLOOD: Part One

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Part One of three. A verse by verse account of the Deluge as recorded in Genesis chapters 6-8. I hope it will be as enlightening as it is poetic in form. (If I cannot do justice to the text I am endeavoring to expose, then I write in vain) Thank you for those who come to read and absorb this offering of love.

GENESIS FLOOD: Part One

 

Genesis Flood 

From Heaven’s portals God grieves
Of all men living only one believes 

Gen 6:1-9 

In year five hundred of Noah’s life
The earth burst full with violence and strife
Noah was a man of faith and favor
He trusted his God and decried the Slaver
Of hate and lust and acrid waste
To weigh in the balance what he must face 

Beautiful born are the daughters of men
Given to marriage for God’s sons again
But spiting the Lord who gave them breath
Inviting depravity, sow seeds to death 

In these same days of God’s voice calling
Was the race of giants, Nephilim, fallen
The high and mighty who would not know God
Warriors and builders, hunting great game
The inverse of heroes in unrefined fame

The fallen, mighty of great renown
In darker arts, blaspheme, expound
For the lesser gods have required
To serve them well and bide desire
Pass their young ones through hell’s fire 

Murder as common as eating food
Man’s heart continually despising good
Populous defiant before God’s face
Only Noah walked in faith and grace

The love of God reigned from Heaven
Evil held the world in enslavement
In tears of rain by clouds of death
The entire earth would lose its breath

So God affirmed destruction of earth
All sons of men and animals, birthed
The creeping, walking and the flying
The heart of God, broken, crying

The call to Noah was to build an ark
To rise above the floods of dark
For to this point it never rained:
Water emerged under misted terrain

(At the edge of air, before deep space
God created a crystalline place:
Eliminating UV and Gamma type waves
Assuring good health and length of days

Encasing earth’s air in crystal water
Was the prime source of flood’s slaughter)
The unknowing crowds clamored with laughter
Before Noah’s message of water disaster

The generations of Noah were perfection
He was just and faithful to God’s direction
His walk by faith was saving grace
For transport remnant of the human race 

 Gen. 6:10-22 

Noah’s sons, Shem, Japheth and Ham
First descendents of first saved man
Shunning the insidious, sought God’s face
A heritage for History would take their place 

The earth, a bastion for wanton violence
The walk by faith, an endangered reliance
God looked through tears at Creation’s crown
One heeded His voice to face judgment’s sound

Those beloved, wicked, relished disobedience
Whose parching thirst, imagined the worst
Shedding all virtue, for slaying excellence
Consumed one another, whether sister, brother
Who by ungodly perceptions, pursued indiscretions

God said to Noah, “Before I end the flesh of all living
I provide you passage in directions I’m giving
You shall construct an ark of gopher wood
[A haven afloat for young beasts to their good”]

“Seal it with pitch within and without
[For above water’s destruction, in holy abduction
On long journey buoys you, dry, without doubt”]

“And in this fashion with passion twill build
In cubits prescribed and animals filled
The run of the ark, three hundred long
Height will be thirty and fifty it’s breadth”
Saving male and female creatures their breath

 

God commanded Noah install a window light
A vent for air and hope for sight
And the door would be cut in the side of this ark
Enclosing all within as skies grew dark

An entrance for three levels, assigned to each floor
The Lord, God Himself would be closing the door
The faithful words of His God would be heeded
For covenants’ fulfillment, they had all each needed

To gather beasts born of great and the small
Cattle, fowl, creepers and food for them all
And Noah did all that His Lord had required
For one hundred years, he labored, inspired

His report of rains and flood’s delegation                                                          
Was stranger than fiction to this generation
 

While in midst of all culture was a great party
The stout, rich, mighty, living quite hardy
Noah and sons, "sick prophets of doom"
Had foretold of flood to descend and upend
The whole earth as a tomb

 

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Whiskers commented on GENESIS FLOOD: Part One

01-23-2011

Ahhh Marsink, this is wonderful. Throughly enjoyed it so far as have done exhaustive study of the book of Genesis myself. Can't wait to get to parts 2 & 3. Blessings.

Marsink

01/23/2011

I'm happy to see you have enjoyed it. Genesis is fascinating in its narrative, but also, the many things of the pre-deluvian period, that are hard to understand, in that the entire eco-system and atmospheric dynamics have been altered. The earth is about 75% water-to-land ratio, on the surface; chances are it was a greater amount of land mass then. thanks for reading, Gary!

knight4696 commented on GENESIS FLOOD: Part One

04-04-2010

Wow Marsink! WOW!!!! This is incredible. If only my catacysm class was as interesting - I may have learned more. This is a definate Masterpiece! I can't imagine te amount of time, heart and soul that went into this my friend! AWESOME! You are one helluva writer! :) Ken

Marsink

04/05/2010

Thanks for your very high praise! I'm glad you liked it. It was a labor of love (and some small frustration) So good of you to stop by and deliver good encouragement!

cousinsoren commented on GENESIS FLOOD: Part One

04-03-2010

cousinsoren commented on GENESIS FLOOD: Part One 25 min ago I love narrative poetry. When a story is told with such profound dephs and such imposing elevation of diction and imagery as this, I am mesmerized and entranced. How Marsink manages to declaim with such grandeur, without losing sight of the religious overtones, is cause for wonderment, I egotistically regard myself as a "critical;" and harsh critic, but I find no fault in this monumental edifice of poetry, My rating is 10x10+.

Marsink

04/04/2010

Again, I thank you, Oren!!

cousinsoren commented on GENESIS FLOOD: Part One

04-03-2010

I love narrrative poetry. When the a story is told with such profound dephs and such imposing elevation of diction and imagery as this, I am mesmerized and entranced. How Marsick manages to declaim with such grandeur, without losing sight of the religious overtones is cause for wonderment, I egotistically regard myself as a "critical;" and harsh critic, but I find no fault in this monumenal edifice of poetry, My rating is 10x10+

Marsink

04/03/2010

It seems that your comments are more illustrious than the poem! The reason its good is because it was framed around the Word of God. Thanks for such reverant praise!

mdpoetgirl commented on GENESIS FLOOD: Part One

04-03-2010

Mars, great and insightful, easy to understand. My main drawback was the length... long poems normally make me turn away, but because of the subject matter it held my interest. I understand what you're trying to do here, though, with a verse-by-verse analysis so it works. Guess there's really no way around the lengthy part. Still very good writing here!

Marsink

04/03/2010

I have mixed feeling about presenting as a whole, so I divided it up. The drawback is rating it as one piece and having continuity, if people aren't geared up to read for 25 mins for all three parts. (I may have had fewer readers, but averted a 9 that took me out of the pow) That's the way it goes. I am quite glad of your generous encouragement!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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