George N: The Fight of His Life

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Drugs rob life and steal dreams.

George N: The Fight of His Life

I watch you spiraling down a hill, filled with colorful pills.
I know the evitable is almost ner
But within you there's no fear.

I love you as a friend
and a lover, too
But watching your soulmate sink so low
Makes me panic at what to do.

I've known you for quite a while,
and we've read lots of books for fun
That's the kind of man you are,
But the colored gems have become
more
important and make you the star.

Friends do not leave friends when they are heading downhill
they stay around out of love because that is what they feel.
Never kick a person down when they are at their worst
Friendship is what's needed most, especially when you hurt.

I love you very much, and yes, I really do
But somehow along the way
I lost someone I knew.

I'm here for you and always will
if only as an ear
when you are ready
to make that change
I'll coming running dear.

Love, Carolyn

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chopkins123 commented on George N: The Fight of His Life

10-04-2010

This poem is very truthful regarding the awful addiction of drugs.

chopkins123 commented on George N: The Fight of His Life

09-26-2010

this poem is dedicated to a wonderful friend who is spiraling away because of drugs. it is dedicated to him and his healing

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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