Getting High
I have friends that get highThey try to fly
But they just die
I try to tell them
that they will die
That they will if they try and fly
Getting High
8 Comments
Tags: Death
- chrisheadrick
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They try to fly
But they just die
I try to tell them
that they will die
That they will if they try and fly
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danmartyjake1 commented on Getting High
12-10-2009
- Short Rhyme that gets the message across to the reader and that sometimes, is all that is necessary.
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Rhymer commented on Getting High
12-10-2009
- Nice rhyme to make a point about getting high. Nice write with a message. 10
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jesusfreake commented on Getting High
12-10-2009
- i cant believe i have to comment on this again...stop deleting my comments lol they were all positive!! i like ur poems
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12/10/2009
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deadlybunny commented on Getting High
12-10-2009
- I like the power in your poem. thanks for letting me read....Sierra(deadlybunny)
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12/10/2009
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Mandi commented on Getting High
11-16-2009
- don't listen to walbear.... just because it's short it speaks volumes
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