Ghostly Images

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    Ghostly Images

    somewhere high on a moor in Scotland

    ghostly images dance to a fiddler’s tune

    bracken and heather surround them

    As they spin and leap and swoon

     

    fronds extend their eerie fingers

    mimicking dead hands of the past

    a bonfire burns eternally

     but no shadows does it cast

     

     flame’s reach high into the ancient sky

    In search of visions of times past

        the fiddle plays on and  the images dance

     Refreshed by the cobblers last  

     

    who are these ghosts? why do they dance?

    one answer stands  above all

    they are the sons of Scotland it’s said

    who  died in defense of her soil

     

    they stand on guard, if needed

    to once again defend her shore

    they dance and wait and listen

    for the bagpipes mournful call to war

    ©Copyright 2009 Charlie Gragg  

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    knight4696 commented on Ghostly Images

    11-21-2009

    A ghostly tale of the son's of Scotland - Forever proud!. Love the imagery and storyline. A really nice job! ...... Ken

    Hampton

    11/21/2009

    Thank you for visiting and commenting.

    MSVanallen commented on Ghostly Images

    10-05-2009

    Wonderful lore...great piece. Rythm, rhyme, flow. You got it, man!!!

    Hampton

    10/05/2009

    Thanks, this is one of my favorite writes. Keep smiling.

    bluewolf commented on Ghostly Images

    08-27-2009

    I really like this poem. It brings to life the mythical beliefs/ideas of Scotland and its surrounding area. Excellent metaphoric texture.

    Hampton

    08/27/2009

    That is very kind of you. Thank you and I am pleased you liked it

    Hampton

    08/27/2009

    That is very kind of you. Thank you and I am pleased you liked it

    wheelsal commented on Ghostly Images

    08-13-2009

    I swear you've been there dancing on the moors and leas. You imagery is great. Sally

    Hampton

    08/13/2009

    Many thanks for your comments.

    Stardrift commented on Ghostly Images

    08-12-2009

    Hi, Hampton! A fellow Scottish lad and poet! Sharply vivid imagery you've conjured herein. '...fronds extend their eerie fingers...', that sets the scene well. The opening line launches very effectively with its vague location. And the last verse reminds us that Scotland's past isn't really all too long ago - it maintains its relevance, however mysterious its history has since become. Hamps, lol, I wrote something EXACTLY along these lines - Scotengire's Missive - you should love it! Smashing write!!

    Hampton

    08/13/2009

    I read your poem and I must say I was impressed with its depth and beauty. Worthy of the winning poem.. irrespective of what ever scoring system they apply.

    Hampton

    08/13/2009

    Thank you and I look forward to reading Scotengire's Missive

    Stardrift

    08/13/2009

    Well, thankyou sir! Btw, "Friends" is unforgettable - hilarious that you actually spent effort for that! I'll be reading more of you, and check out my others. Hey, here's an idea, maybe the scoring system should be a random draw, lol! Peace, Hamps, yer a good soul!!

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