Give Me Peace

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Lost Love

    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this from her point of view in the start of the poem then take over from my point of view answering her.

    Give Me Peace

    Will you still Love me, when all I have is my aching soul

    I have nothing but my guilt

    And all I cry for is the other guy

    Will you still Love me after you no longer have me

    Will you still Love me when I’m no longer around

    Please let go of me

    Let all of your grace and Love fade for me

    And he replied

    Let my Heart Love you, give it peace

    Through the tender touch of your lips

    I did you no wrong

    I’ve never betrayed your trust

    So when I ask this small thing

    For this last moment

    Please trust

    That it has a purpose

    A plan

    Purge me with your sin, one last time

    And I will have the strength

    To fade away

    Let my Heart rest in peace

    For thou I may fade

    My Hearts Love will live on

    Through the sunset

    Just give it this last request

    If at all you ever cared

    Then give me this last request

    Put my Heart before yours

    Just this one time

    As my Heart did for yours

    The entire time you deceived it

    This sting against Love will burn my Heart

    Longer than you’ll remember

    Of me

    So one sided

    It’s really not fair

    I wish you cried for me

    I wish you missed me

    I wish you could put my Hearts need

    Before your self

    But I doubt you’ll change

    In listening to your excuses

    Truly saddens my Heart

    Yet still like a fool

    Here I am

    Waiting, hoping, praying

    That this one time

    In this last moment

    In this good bye

    You’ll put me before yourself

    And actually take care of my Heart

    Of the wound you’ve given it

    You have the power to heal your wrong within me

    With just the tender touch

    Of your lips

    Give me peace

    Let my Heart rest

    -Fin-

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    TheLastCowboy commented on Give Me Peace

    05-14-2013

    Wow, you gave me peace; I must confess I'm impressed and moved by this act of care. Thank you!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.
    TheLastCowboy has no poems.