Giving up

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    Giving up

    Sick of crying
    tired of trying
    yeah im smiling
    but inside im dying

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    Tyme commented on Giving up

    04-19-2011

    It's what happens when our hope is deferred. It makes the heart sick.
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    kpeery09 commented on Giving up

    03-15-2010

    Very Nice, its short and straight to the point. I give you 10
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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